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http://www.quibblo.com/user/hello_there
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Friday, June 22, 2012
Thursday, June 21, 2012
My Warriors Series!!
Have you ever heard of "Warriors"? Well, now you have! It's a story written by Erin Hunter. It's about feral cats who live in clans in a forest! And since i am a huge fan of the series, i decided to write a series of my own! I haven't started it yet, though, but i am doing a lot of brainstorming. I have all the basic information i need. The clans in my story are Cloudclan, Woodclan, Streamclan, and Stoneclan. And the cat heaven in my story is Silverclan. And here are all the suffixes: 'kit, 'paw, 'star, and 'seed. There are some special characters in there, and those will be my absolute favourites! I want to thank some name generators, for helping me chose some of the names such as Wildwish, Icepath, and Seafire. Bye, until i write again!!
Sunday, December 5, 2010
Pets from School
"I really don't like mondays," said Laure Daver as she woke up. Laure yawned and then took a bath. Her bathroom was in her room and there was a toilet in her bathroom. Mrs. Daver, her mother made breakfast for her - scrambled egg and sushi. After that, Laure's sister Larra opened the refrigirator and took out a bottle of apple juice. She couldn't reach the cabinet so she had to climd on a chair. Laure was 9 and Larra was 6. Larra got four cups out of the cabinet and brought them over to the dining table. "thanks, Larra," Laure said.
"You're welcome," Larra replied sweetly. A few minutes later, Mr. Daver came to the kitchen and sat at the dining table. Laure poured herself a cup of apple juice. So did Larra. Mr and Mrs. Daver poured theirself a cup too. After everyone was done, Mrs. Daver sent the girls to school. Laure's best friend, Kate, came running to her. "Oh My Goodness! Look!" Screamed Kate pointing to a poster that was stuck on a wall near the courtyard. Laure went to Golden Leaf International School. There, they played in the courtyard for recess, but high school stays in their classes. Laure looked where Kate was pointing. Laure walked to the poster. Laure looked at the poster, it had a picture of a cute little white kitten. "Awwww, how adorable!" Laure said dreamily. "I know, right," said Kate. Laure read what it said.
" Free pets! pet's day on friday, the student that wins first place will recieve this cute little kitten for free! all you have to do is write a pet story!" She read. Laure got excited. She really wanted a pet, and cats were her favourite animals, she really wanted to win 1st place and win that white kitten. " I'm going to enter this competition!" Laure said with a big smile.
" But ofcourse, your good at literacy, your the best in grade 4 when it comes to literacy!" said Kate. "Are you going to enter?" Laure asked Kate.
"I've never written a story, well i wrote 3 stories in school and thats all, i'm going to give it a try but i don't think i'll win," Kate replied.
"It doesn't matter if you win or lose, it just matters that you try your best," Laure told her.
"What animal are you going to write about?" asked Kate.
"ummm... marine animals," replied Laure. "How about you?".
"Rodents..." Kate replied.
Laure and Kate were in 4A. Mendra, a girl in 4B, jumped behind them and said, "Boo!!!".
" AAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!" Kate screamed.
"HaHa! scaredy-cat!" said Mendra.
"You really scared me, next time, i'm telling the teacher!" Kate said.
Laure laughed. she wans't frightened at all. All she could think about was the cute little kitten. But it won't matter is she lost. When they went home, Larra silently crept into their room. Laure and Larra slept in the same room. "WWAAHH!" Larra yelled.
"Not scared of you," said Laure, writing her marine animal story.
"ugh! your never scared!" Larra aid.
"True... why do you try to scare me though?" asked Laure.
"I wanna be braver than you!" replied Larra. "What are you doing anyway?."
"Did you hear the good news?! I'm sooo excited!" screamed Laure.
"Laure, please keep it down, don't scream," said Mrs. Daver as she came into Laure's room.
"Sorry mom, i was excited," Laure said quietly.
"Oh, you're writing a story, you were always the best in class when it comes to literacy," said Mrs. Daver proudly. "She's writing this story because of the competition," explained Larra.
"You knew?" Laure asked Larra.
"Ofcourse i knew, Ms. Marraklin told me, but it's only for grade 3 to 5 so i can't enter, its the principal that chooses the winners - 1st place, 2nd place, and 3rd place, they dont care about the mistakes, they only care about the idea of the story - it could also be real information," Larra told her. "How did you know all that?" askes Laure curiously.
"I asked the principal... i really want that kitten, Laure, i just know that you'll win," said Larra.
"Why would you think that i would win? and if i do, i'll share that kitten with you, it can be my pet and your pet." Laure said. "But i'm not sure if i'll win...". Mrs. Daver looked surprised. Because schools never give free pets.
The next day, Laure was excited to go to school, she would tell her friends all about her story and her friends would tell her about theirs. "Dad, i already took a shower and ate my beakfast she said. "Already?! but its only 6:30!" Mr. Daver said.
"I'm just too excited, that's why i did everything quickly," Laure said.
"That's good to hear," said Mr. Daver. They went to school.
"Hi, Mendra! Hi Kate!" Laure greeted.
"Hi!" Mendra and Kate said at the same time.
"My story is about a beluga whale getting lost and he made friends on the way and those friends helped him out" Laure told them.
"My story is about a white mouse living in a masion and her owner is super, super rich, but extra nice, well the owner wants a new pet o the mouse tries to find other rodents to come live with them," Kate said.
"Mine is about pet care, the owner is mean and there is a new worker but the owner hated the new employee but he public hates the pet care boss so she gets kicked out and the new worker was really kind to the animals that she became the owner at the pet care, it also includes pets," Mendra said. The girls were impressed by eachother's stories. "Goodmorning, girls," said ms. Lonn, the principal. "Goodmorning ms. Lonn," Said the girls.
"Could you go and tell the grade 1s and 2s that there is another pet competition that they can eneter?" Said Ms. Lonn.
"Yes," they replied. So Laure, Kate, and Mendra went to the grade 1 classes first and then the grade 2s. When they went home, Laure continued writing her story. Tomorrow was when they had to hand in their stories but they grade 1s and 2s only got the news today so they have 3 more days. In 10 minutes, Laure finished her story. "AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Larra screamed as she came into their room. "You're so noisy!" Laure said to her sister.
"I just felt like screaming!" Larra screamed again.
"Whats wrong, Larra, please don't scream," Mrs. Daver said running into the room.
"Sorry..." Larra said. Larra got a piece of paper and started her story. That night, Laure was too excited to sleep at 9. She fell asleep at 10:30. The next day, Laure took a shower, brushed het teeth and ate her breakfast. She woke up at 4:25. Laure looked at her watch. "Oh My Goodness! its only 5:30 and i'm already changing into my school uniform!" she said to herself. 1 hour later, everyone else woke up. "Laure, what time did you wake up?" asked Larra.
"umm i changed into my uniform at 5:30 so i think i woke up at 4:25," replied LAure everyone was surprised. When they went to school, Laure handed in her paper. "The winner will be declared tomorrow," Ms. Lonn told them.
" I can't wait!" said Kate.
"Neither can I!" said Laure. Today, at school, they talked about all different kinds of animals. Laure just couldn't wait until tomorrow.
The next day, when they went to school, grade 3s, 4s and 5s gathered in the theatre 1st thing in the morning. Ms. Lonn was the 1 to choose the winner. "And the winner is........ Laure from grade 4A!" Ms. Lonn declared. Laure couldn't believe it! she won 1st place! 1st place! "The 2nd place winner is....Darry from grade 3!". "And 3rd place winner is... Hannah from grade 5!".
Laure was sooo excited! She was going to get a kitten! a cute kitten! But she hoped her mom knew about this. That day, when they went home, Laure brought home a cute, furry, little, white kitten! "I'm not surprised you won," said Mrs. Daver proudly. So her mom did know about his, Larra told her. "Awww, its Adorable!" Larra said stroking it. "I'm going to call it Snowy, because its as white as snow!" said Laure.
Three days later, it was the day for the winners of the grade 1 and 2 competition winners to be declared. But Larra didn't win. "Sorry that you lost," Said Mr. Daver.
"But i don't care, the prize was an orange hamster, i prefer a kitten," said Larra.
So getting pets from school was something happy for Laure and Larra!!!
The End
"You're welcome," Larra replied sweetly. A few minutes later, Mr. Daver came to the kitchen and sat at the dining table. Laure poured herself a cup of apple juice. So did Larra. Mr and Mrs. Daver poured theirself a cup too. After everyone was done, Mrs. Daver sent the girls to school. Laure's best friend, Kate, came running to her. "Oh My Goodness! Look!" Screamed Kate pointing to a poster that was stuck on a wall near the courtyard. Laure went to Golden Leaf International School. There, they played in the courtyard for recess, but high school stays in their classes. Laure looked where Kate was pointing. Laure walked to the poster. Laure looked at the poster, it had a picture of a cute little white kitten. "Awwww, how adorable!" Laure said dreamily. "I know, right," said Kate. Laure read what it said.
" Free pets! pet's day on friday, the student that wins first place will recieve this cute little kitten for free! all you have to do is write a pet story!" She read. Laure got excited. She really wanted a pet, and cats were her favourite animals, she really wanted to win 1st place and win that white kitten. " I'm going to enter this competition!" Laure said with a big smile.
" But ofcourse, your good at literacy, your the best in grade 4 when it comes to literacy!" said Kate. "Are you going to enter?" Laure asked Kate.
"I've never written a story, well i wrote 3 stories in school and thats all, i'm going to give it a try but i don't think i'll win," Kate replied.
"It doesn't matter if you win or lose, it just matters that you try your best," Laure told her.
"What animal are you going to write about?" asked Kate.
"ummm... marine animals," replied Laure. "How about you?".
"Rodents..." Kate replied.
Laure and Kate were in 4A. Mendra, a girl in 4B, jumped behind them and said, "Boo!!!".
" AAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!" Kate screamed.
"HaHa! scaredy-cat!" said Mendra.
"You really scared me, next time, i'm telling the teacher!" Kate said.
Laure laughed. she wans't frightened at all. All she could think about was the cute little kitten. But it won't matter is she lost. When they went home, Larra silently crept into their room. Laure and Larra slept in the same room. "WWAAHH!" Larra yelled.
"Not scared of you," said Laure, writing her marine animal story.
"ugh! your never scared!" Larra aid.
"True... why do you try to scare me though?" asked Laure.
"I wanna be braver than you!" replied Larra. "What are you doing anyway?."
"Did you hear the good news?! I'm sooo excited!" screamed Laure.
"Laure, please keep it down, don't scream," said Mrs. Daver as she came into Laure's room.
"Sorry mom, i was excited," Laure said quietly.
"Oh, you're writing a story, you were always the best in class when it comes to literacy," said Mrs. Daver proudly. "She's writing this story because of the competition," explained Larra.
"You knew?" Laure asked Larra.
"Ofcourse i knew, Ms. Marraklin told me, but it's only for grade 3 to 5 so i can't enter, its the principal that chooses the winners - 1st place, 2nd place, and 3rd place, they dont care about the mistakes, they only care about the idea of the story - it could also be real information," Larra told her. "How did you know all that?" askes Laure curiously.
"I asked the principal... i really want that kitten, Laure, i just know that you'll win," said Larra.
"Why would you think that i would win? and if i do, i'll share that kitten with you, it can be my pet and your pet." Laure said. "But i'm not sure if i'll win...". Mrs. Daver looked surprised. Because schools never give free pets.
The next day, Laure was excited to go to school, she would tell her friends all about her story and her friends would tell her about theirs. "Dad, i already took a shower and ate my beakfast she said. "Already?! but its only 6:30!" Mr. Daver said.
"I'm just too excited, that's why i did everything quickly," Laure said.
"That's good to hear," said Mr. Daver. They went to school.
"Hi, Mendra! Hi Kate!" Laure greeted.
"Hi!" Mendra and Kate said at the same time.
"My story is about a beluga whale getting lost and he made friends on the way and those friends helped him out" Laure told them.
"My story is about a white mouse living in a masion and her owner is super, super rich, but extra nice, well the owner wants a new pet o the mouse tries to find other rodents to come live with them," Kate said.
"Mine is about pet care, the owner is mean and there is a new worker but the owner hated the new employee but he public hates the pet care boss so she gets kicked out and the new worker was really kind to the animals that she became the owner at the pet care, it also includes pets," Mendra said. The girls were impressed by eachother's stories. "Goodmorning, girls," said ms. Lonn, the principal. "Goodmorning ms. Lonn," Said the girls.
"Could you go and tell the grade 1s and 2s that there is another pet competition that they can eneter?" Said Ms. Lonn.
"Yes," they replied. So Laure, Kate, and Mendra went to the grade 1 classes first and then the grade 2s. When they went home, Laure continued writing her story. Tomorrow was when they had to hand in their stories but they grade 1s and 2s only got the news today so they have 3 more days. In 10 minutes, Laure finished her story. "AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Larra screamed as she came into their room. "You're so noisy!" Laure said to her sister.
"I just felt like screaming!" Larra screamed again.
"Whats wrong, Larra, please don't scream," Mrs. Daver said running into the room.
"Sorry..." Larra said. Larra got a piece of paper and started her story. That night, Laure was too excited to sleep at 9. She fell asleep at 10:30. The next day, Laure took a shower, brushed het teeth and ate her breakfast. She woke up at 4:25. Laure looked at her watch. "Oh My Goodness! its only 5:30 and i'm already changing into my school uniform!" she said to herself. 1 hour later, everyone else woke up. "Laure, what time did you wake up?" asked Larra.
"umm i changed into my uniform at 5:30 so i think i woke up at 4:25," replied LAure everyone was surprised. When they went to school, Laure handed in her paper. "The winner will be declared tomorrow," Ms. Lonn told them.
" I can't wait!" said Kate.
"Neither can I!" said Laure. Today, at school, they talked about all different kinds of animals. Laure just couldn't wait until tomorrow.
The next day, when they went to school, grade 3s, 4s and 5s gathered in the theatre 1st thing in the morning. Ms. Lonn was the 1 to choose the winner. "And the winner is........ Laure from grade 4A!" Ms. Lonn declared. Laure couldn't believe it! she won 1st place! 1st place! "The 2nd place winner is....Darry from grade 3!". "And 3rd place winner is... Hannah from grade 5!".
Laure was sooo excited! She was going to get a kitten! a cute kitten! But she hoped her mom knew about this. That day, when they went home, Laure brought home a cute, furry, little, white kitten! "I'm not surprised you won," said Mrs. Daver proudly. So her mom did know about his, Larra told her. "Awww, its Adorable!" Larra said stroking it. "I'm going to call it Snowy, because its as white as snow!" said Laure.
Three days later, it was the day for the winners of the grade 1 and 2 competition winners to be declared. But Larra didn't win. "Sorry that you lost," Said Mr. Daver.
"But i don't care, the prize was an orange hamster, i prefer a kitten," said Larra.
So getting pets from school was something happy for Laure and Larra!!!
The End
Saturday, December 4, 2010
Whimsical Wonder World
Once, there was a girl called Kessla. She had a cousin called Eric. Kessla was 9, Eric was 8 1/2.
They both loved adventures. 2 weeks ago they went on an adventure with their eldest cousin Derra. They found a tiger but defeated it. Kessla and Eric were waiting for a new adventure. Kessla crept into Eric's room 1 early morning and shouted " WAKE UP!".
Eric jumped. "Why what's wrong? is there a bee? or a monster?" He asked frightened.
" No, silly! let's go look for an adventure!" Kessla said proudly as she tied her dark black shoulder length hair. Eric combed his red hair. "hy can't you just find another cousin to go with?" he asked.
"because the other cousins don't really like adventures that much," Kessla replied.
"that's true..." Eric said quietly. Kessla went back to her room to change her clothes. After Eric changed, he knocked on Kessla's room door. " Are you done?" he asked.
" yes, i'm just getting my backpack," Kessla replied. Kessla and Eric both went to the living room. The cousins all lived in the same house. Kessla's granparents only had to children - Kessla's mom and Aunt Bell. " hello Mel," said Aunt Bell to Kessla's mom.
" goodmorning," Kessla's mom replied. Their last name was Nando. " mom, can we go on an adventure?" Kessla asked.
"yes, but becareful," said mrs. Nando.
Kessla and Eric went outside. "Where should we go for our adventure?" asked Eric.
"Somewhere magical," Kessla said throwing her hands in the air.
"Cool! lets search in the forest first," Eric said. The 2 of them ran to the forest quickly and excitedly. They never heard of magic but they believed in it. Later, they heard a roaring sound from the jungle. " AAhhhhhhh! its a tiger!" Kessla screamed.
" but its dying so we don't have to worry about it," Eric whispered. The tiger was lying on the ground roaring in pain. it was bleeding. "Maybe a hunter tried to kill it," Kessla said.
"I think so..." Eric said, thinking.
Then there was another sound. This time, it was not an animal. It sounded something like "cling!". Eric and Kessla both looked where the sound was coming from. there was a sparkly bush. Kessla tried to touch it but instead, she fell inside the bush and disappeared. "Kessla? Kessla?! where are you?" he asked worriedly. He tried to touch the bush but he also fell in. Eric found himself in a red twirling place. There, he met Kessla. "Hi, Eric, i didn't think you'd come here with me!" Kessla said spinning in the twirl. 5 minutes later, they fell and landed in a magical land. The people there were surprised to see them there. "Welcome to Whimsical Wonder World" an old man said. the old mans moustache was really long, his shirt was white and he wore a gentleman jacket but his tie was purple with blue circles and his pants were yellow with orange squares. He looked really funny because of his moustache and his clothes didn't match. "You look funny," Eric said.
"ofcourse i do, everyone here looks whimsical, thats why this place is called Whimsical Wonder World!" The old man said. "Im the mayor of this place".
"well its nice to meet you," said Kessla. Then, a lady with with really, really narrow legs, a fat body, and heartshaped head came. She looked Whimsical too. "Goodmorining mayor," she said with a smile. The mayor smiled back. "Hello, are you from Apple Shine town?" asked a little girl. "Yes, we are," replied Kessla.
"Becaused you don't look whimsical," the little girl said.
"That's right," said Eric.
The mayor showed them around Whimsical Wonder World. It looked really funny, but thats what whimsical means. They even got new friends now... the people there really liked them. The played for 50 minutes. "Eric! it's nearly 7, mom told us to be back at six thirty!" Kessla said as she looked at her watch. "they didn't say that!" Eric said.
"yes, they did! They told us yesterday!" Kessla said.
"oh well," Eric said. "I'm sorry, we have to go home now," Kessla said to the whimsical people.
"Don't tell anyone about us or this magical place," said the whimsical mayor.
"we won't," said Eric.
"Will you come back?" the little girl asked.
"we'll visit once a week," Kessla told them.
"Why not everyday?" Eric asked Kessla.
"Because the adults won't let us," Kessla said. They all said bye to eachother. Kessla and Eric went home. "Why did you stay until 6:55?" asked aunt bel.
"You let us go out at 5:45," Kessla told them.
"oh, did we? then thats ok," said the adults. Kessla and Eric remembered not to tell anyone about Whimsical Wonder World.
THE END
That was 1 of my stories... my blog will be mostly stories.
They both loved adventures. 2 weeks ago they went on an adventure with their eldest cousin Derra. They found a tiger but defeated it. Kessla and Eric were waiting for a new adventure. Kessla crept into Eric's room 1 early morning and shouted " WAKE UP!".
Eric jumped. "Why what's wrong? is there a bee? or a monster?" He asked frightened.
" No, silly! let's go look for an adventure!" Kessla said proudly as she tied her dark black shoulder length hair. Eric combed his red hair. "hy can't you just find another cousin to go with?" he asked.
"because the other cousins don't really like adventures that much," Kessla replied.
"that's true..." Eric said quietly. Kessla went back to her room to change her clothes. After Eric changed, he knocked on Kessla's room door. " Are you done?" he asked.
" yes, i'm just getting my backpack," Kessla replied. Kessla and Eric both went to the living room. The cousins all lived in the same house. Kessla's granparents only had to children - Kessla's mom and Aunt Bell. " hello Mel," said Aunt Bell to Kessla's mom.
" goodmorning," Kessla's mom replied. Their last name was Nando. " mom, can we go on an adventure?" Kessla asked.
"yes, but becareful," said mrs. Nando.
Kessla and Eric went outside. "Where should we go for our adventure?" asked Eric.
"Somewhere magical," Kessla said throwing her hands in the air.
"Cool! lets search in the forest first," Eric said. The 2 of them ran to the forest quickly and excitedly. They never heard of magic but they believed in it. Later, they heard a roaring sound from the jungle. " AAhhhhhhh! its a tiger!" Kessla screamed.
" but its dying so we don't have to worry about it," Eric whispered. The tiger was lying on the ground roaring in pain. it was bleeding. "Maybe a hunter tried to kill it," Kessla said.
"I think so..." Eric said, thinking.
Then there was another sound. This time, it was not an animal. It sounded something like "cling!". Eric and Kessla both looked where the sound was coming from. there was a sparkly bush. Kessla tried to touch it but instead, she fell inside the bush and disappeared. "Kessla? Kessla?! where are you?" he asked worriedly. He tried to touch the bush but he also fell in. Eric found himself in a red twirling place. There, he met Kessla. "Hi, Eric, i didn't think you'd come here with me!" Kessla said spinning in the twirl. 5 minutes later, they fell and landed in a magical land. The people there were surprised to see them there. "Welcome to Whimsical Wonder World" an old man said. the old mans moustache was really long, his shirt was white and he wore a gentleman jacket but his tie was purple with blue circles and his pants were yellow with orange squares. He looked really funny because of his moustache and his clothes didn't match. "You look funny," Eric said.
"ofcourse i do, everyone here looks whimsical, thats why this place is called Whimsical Wonder World!" The old man said. "Im the mayor of this place".
"well its nice to meet you," said Kessla. Then, a lady with with really, really narrow legs, a fat body, and heartshaped head came. She looked Whimsical too. "Goodmorining mayor," she said with a smile. The mayor smiled back. "Hello, are you from Apple Shine town?" asked a little girl. "Yes, we are," replied Kessla.
"Becaused you don't look whimsical," the little girl said.
"That's right," said Eric.
The mayor showed them around Whimsical Wonder World. It looked really funny, but thats what whimsical means. They even got new friends now... the people there really liked them. The played for 50 minutes. "Eric! it's nearly 7, mom told us to be back at six thirty!" Kessla said as she looked at her watch. "they didn't say that!" Eric said.
"yes, they did! They told us yesterday!" Kessla said.
"oh well," Eric said. "I'm sorry, we have to go home now," Kessla said to the whimsical people.
"Don't tell anyone about us or this magical place," said the whimsical mayor.
"we won't," said Eric.
"Will you come back?" the little girl asked.
"we'll visit once a week," Kessla told them.
"Why not everyday?" Eric asked Kessla.
"Because the adults won't let us," Kessla said. They all said bye to eachother. Kessla and Eric went home. "Why did you stay until 6:55?" asked aunt bel.
"You let us go out at 5:45," Kessla told them.
"oh, did we? then thats ok," said the adults. Kessla and Eric remembered not to tell anyone about Whimsical Wonder World.
THE END
That was 1 of my stories... my blog will be mostly stories.
Friday, December 3, 2010
Dreams...
Your dream can come true, that is if you make it come true. You have to do something to make it come true, don't just sit there. My Dream is to be a writer or singer... that dream won't come true if i don't do anything, i will make it come true. Like Terry Fox - he believed that dreams can come true, he made his dream come true and became a hero. But in making a dream come true, you are not alone, there are many people that can help you, all you need is someone like you to help and believe that dreams can come true. If you really belive, you dream will come true.
Sunday, July 5, 2009
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