Saturday, December 4, 2010

Whimsical Wonder World

Once, there was a girl called Kessla. She had a cousin called Eric. Kessla was 9, Eric was 8 1/2.
They both loved adventures. 2 weeks ago they went on an adventure with their eldest cousin Derra. They found a tiger but defeated it. Kessla and Eric were waiting for a new adventure. Kessla crept into Eric's room 1 early morning and shouted " WAKE UP!".
Eric jumped. "Why what's wrong? is there a bee? or a monster?" He asked frightened.
" No, silly! let's go look for an adventure!" Kessla said proudly as she tied her dark black shoulder length hair. Eric combed his red hair. "hy can't you just find another cousin to go with?" he asked.
"because the other cousins don't really like adventures that much," Kessla replied.
"that's true..." Eric said quietly. Kessla went back to her room to change her clothes. After Eric changed, he knocked on Kessla's room door. " Are you done?" he asked.
" yes, i'm just getting my backpack," Kessla replied. Kessla and Eric both went to the living room. The cousins all lived in the same house. Kessla's granparents only had to children - Kessla's mom and Aunt Bell. " hello Mel," said Aunt Bell to Kessla's mom.
" goodmorning," Kessla's mom replied. Their last name was Nando. " mom, can we go on an adventure?" Kessla asked.
"yes, but becareful," said mrs. Nando.
Kessla and Eric went outside. "Where should we go for our adventure?" asked Eric.
"Somewhere magical," Kessla said throwing her hands in the air.
"Cool! lets search in the forest first," Eric said. The 2 of them ran to the forest quickly and excitedly. They never heard of magic but they believed in it. Later, they heard a roaring sound from the jungle. " AAhhhhhhh! its a tiger!" Kessla screamed.
" but its dying so we don't have to worry about it," Eric whispered. The tiger was lying on the ground roaring in pain. it was bleeding. "Maybe a hunter tried to kill it," Kessla said.
"I think so..." Eric said, thinking.
Then there was another sound. This time, it was not an animal. It sounded something like "cling!". Eric and Kessla both looked where the sound was coming from. there was a sparkly bush. Kessla tried to touch it but instead, she fell inside the bush and disappeared. "Kessla? Kessla?! where are you?" he asked worriedly. He tried to touch the bush but he also fell in. Eric found himself in a red twirling place. There, he met Kessla. "Hi, Eric, i didn't think you'd come here with me!" Kessla said spinning in the twirl. 5 minutes later, they fell and landed in a magical land. The people there were surprised to see them there. "Welcome to Whimsical Wonder World" an old man said. the old mans moustache was really long, his shirt was white and he wore a gentleman jacket but his tie was purple with blue circles and his pants were yellow with orange squares. He looked really funny because of his moustache and his clothes didn't match. "You look funny," Eric said.
"ofcourse i do, everyone here looks whimsical, thats why this place is called Whimsical Wonder World!" The old man said. "Im the mayor of this place".
"well its nice to meet you," said Kessla. Then, a lady with with really, really narrow legs, a fat body, and heartshaped head came. She looked Whimsical too. "Goodmorining mayor," she said with a smile. The mayor smiled back. "Hello, are you from Apple Shine town?" asked a little girl. "Yes, we are," replied Kessla.
"Becaused you don't look whimsical," the little girl said.
"That's right," said Eric.
The mayor showed them around Whimsical Wonder World. It looked really funny, but thats what whimsical means. They even got new friends now... the people there really liked them. The played for 50 minutes. "Eric! it's nearly 7, mom told us to be back at six thirty!" Kessla said as she looked at her watch. "they didn't say that!" Eric said.
"yes, they did! They told us yesterday!" Kessla said.
"oh well," Eric said. "I'm sorry, we have to go home now," Kessla said to the whimsical people.
"Don't tell anyone about us or this magical place," said the whimsical mayor.
"we won't," said Eric.
"Will you come back?" the little girl asked.
"we'll visit once a week," Kessla told them.
"Why not everyday?" Eric asked Kessla.
"Because the adults won't let us," Kessla said. They all said bye to eachother. Kessla and Eric went home. "Why did you stay until 6:55?" asked aunt bel.
"You let us go out at 5:45," Kessla told them.
"oh, did we? then thats ok," said the adults. Kessla and Eric remembered not to tell anyone about Whimsical Wonder World.
THE END
That was 1 of my stories... my blog will be mostly stories.

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